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Title: Lockon’s Powers of Persuasion
Author: Aravis Tarkheena
Pairing: Setsuna/Lockon
Rating: NC-17, totally.
Warnings: PWP, slash, sex: rimming, oral, anal. Jesus Christ, did I really write this?
Disclaimer: Not mine, everyone’s legal. Blah blah blah.
Word Count: Somewhere around 1,100ish. Short, essentially.
Author’s Notes: I, uh, I have no justification for this. I wanted porn? Is that good enough? You guys like porn, right? Sure you do.



Lockon’s Powers of Persuasion

Setsuna was sprawled out face down, trying to quiet his gasps and whines in the tangled sheets that littered Lockon’s bed. For once his face, normally blank and unreadable, was tight with arousal. His brow was furrowed, as if he wanted to focus as deeply as he could on every sensation that Lockon milked from his hypersensitive body.

Lockon had found early on that Setsuna was, unsurprisingly, exceptionally demanding in bed. Lockon had also discovered, fairly quickly, that he could easily be reduced to a far more compliant, far more malleable, far more agreeable lover so long as the proper steps were taken.

Lockon coaxed Setsuna up on his hands and knees with softly crooning encouragements. Setsuna’s pupils were blown and his eyes dark when he looked back at Lockon over his left shoulder for direction.

“That’s right beautiful,” Lockon whispered against the soft skin of Setsuna’s thigh. “Just spread your legs a little more for me. That’s it…”

It was perfectly pornographic, seeing him like this. Any hesitation Setsuna had when Lockon initially suggested it was instantly melted away at the first touch of Lockon’s mouth on his cock. Setsuna had pleaded silently with grasping fingers and jerking hips as Lockon moved his mouth over him until he was too desperate to come to protest.

Lockon tried to give Setsuna a reassuring smile as he reached his hands up to caress over the lightly muscled torso and slender hips. He made his touch as gentle as possible as he slid his fingers down over Setsuna’s ass and spread him wide.

Setsuna began to shift uncomfortably under Lockon’s hands until Lockon leaned down and lapped gently at Setsuna’s hole.

“Lockon,” Setsuna choked on his name, he sounded as surprised as Lockon had ever heard him. It made him smile.

“I thought you liked my mouth, lovely,” he chided. “I thought you wanted more of it.”

“Not there,” Setsuna sounded breathlessly petulant and every bit of his sixteen years.

Lockon spared himself time to smirk before spearing his tongue as deep into Setsuna as he could. Setsuna gasped and tried to shift away, Lockon stilled his hips with firm hands as he lapped and licked and penetrated Setsuna with his tongue.

Setsuna was gripping Lockon’s sheets for dear life and tossing his head violently by the time Lockon decided that it was long past time he had a finger in his lover. He continued licking softly before pressing a thumb slowly into Setsuna.

Setsuna stiffened sharply, his entire body tensed as Lockon penetrated him. Lockon could feel the air frozen in Setsuna’s lungs and the tautness of Setsuna’s muscles under his fingers.

He pressed deeper with his mouth and his thumb, pushing further into Setsuna’s inviting heat. He should stop, he should reassure Setsuna, tell him that everything would be fine if he just relaxed. He didn’t.

There was a wicked part to Lockon, the part that kept slicking Setsuna with spit and loosening him with his fingers even as Setsuna tensed with pain and shock and fear. It was the wicked part of Lockon that couldn’t help wanted to push Setsuna a little, to see how far he could go before Setsuna called a stop to all this. The part that wanted to see just how much Setsuna wanted this. Wanted him.

Setsuna was making low, hurt sounds deep in his chest when Lockon sat back on his heels to watch his own hand as he pressed two more fingers into Setsuna. He could feel the low grade trembling that wracked Setsuna’s slender figure, but he never stopped, never relented.

Setsuna wanted this just as much as he did. He would have stopped Lockon ages ago if he hadn’t.

Lockon worked his fingers in and out of Setsuna, slowly fucking him until Setsuna picked up the rhythm and moved back against him, almost imperceptibly.

Lockon licked his lips and spit into his hand, slicking his dick and gave Setsuna no warning when pulled his other hand out and pressed his dick in. Setsuna probably would have made a noise then, if he hadn’t been trained for so long to stay silent no matter what conditions he was under. Lockon felt the sharp tremor in Setsuna’s lungs and the convulsions in his larynx as he cried out, soundlessly, for Lockon.

Lockon plastered himself to Setsuna’s back, wrapping an arm around his too thin waist and another up under his shoulder. Gripping him tightly, gaining purchase so he could pull Setsuna’s body back against his thrusting hips.

He buried his face into Setsuna’s shoulder, panting into his hair as he fucked Setsuna with a relentless passion that felt a little like dying. Setsuna was gasping under him, moving, shifting, writhing with him, away from him, against him. His muscles, taunt with unsatisfied passion, quavered and quaked all around Lockon and it was all he could do to keep from shouting as he came, pressed deeply into Setsuna.

He barely gave himself a moment to recover before pulling out of Setsuna and flipping him onto his back.

Setuna’s eyes were twisted shut with frustration and his lips were red and wet from biting at them to keep from making sounds. Lockon wasted no time before slipping his fingers back inside Setsuna, feeling how slick he was from Lockon’s own come and spit.

Setsuna’s grasping fingers slid into Lockon’s hair as Lockon pressed his mouth down on Setsuna’s cock, taking him deep and fast, sucking hard. It took Setsuna less than thirty seconds before he came with a gasp, his fingers tightening in Lockon’s hair as his body clenched convulsively around the fingers Lockon had inside him.

Setsuna pushed him away then, shoving himself higher on the bed as he rode the aftershocks and kept Lockon’s questing fingers away from his over-stimulated body. He was shuddering, breathing hard through his nose as his narrow chest heaved. He was covered in hickys, bite marks, and dark red abrasions from where Lockon hadn’t been nearly as gentle with him as he probably should have. Come and spit were liberally splatter across his chest and legs. Setsuna’s body looked thoroughly used, but it was his face that caught Lockon’s attention. It was relaxed into an eminently pleased, if some what sleepy, self satisfied smirk.

Lockon couldn’t help the smirk that ghosted across his face at the sight. He had a feeling it would be a lot easier to convince Setsuna to try new things after this.

Comments

( 21 comments — Leave a comment )
saavikam77
Apr. 25th, 2008 08:47 pm (UTC)
I don't even know who these characters are, but DAMN that was hot. O_O

*fans self*
aravistarkheena
Apr. 25th, 2008 10:01 pm (UTC)
They're from Gundam 00.

I'm glad you liked it. :D
war_gasm
Apr. 25th, 2008 09:19 pm (UTC)
That was amazingly hot. Lockon + Setsuna + rimming = WIN WIN WIN. ♥

Thank you so much for sharing!
aravistarkheena
Apr. 25th, 2008 10:02 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you liked it. >:D
sanada
Apr. 25th, 2008 09:31 pm (UTC)
That was so hot my brain melted! I love seeing Lockon's naughty side, lol.
aravistarkheena
Apr. 25th, 2008 10:02 pm (UTC)
Yeah, Lockon was totally naughty in this one. >:D
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aravistarkheena
Apr. 26th, 2008 06:40 pm (UTC)
Thanks! :D
lysimachia
Apr. 26th, 2008 09:28 am (UTC)
...

*brain breaks*

Hot damn.
aravistarkheena
Apr. 26th, 2008 06:41 pm (UTC)
>:3
pikacheeka
Apr. 26th, 2008 06:47 pm (UTC)
HOT.

I think you have just made me a Lockon x Setsuna fan. And I love the idea of Lockon having a slightly sadistic side. I make him that way too. <3 Your Setsuna was perfect though, very much in character. And it's nice to read a yaoi fic where the uke isn't begging the whole damn time.

I'll keep an eye out for your other G00 fics now!
aravistarkheena
Feb. 28th, 2011 12:14 am (UTC)
Oh man, someone just commented to this fic again and I realized I never answered some of the feedback on this page. I'm SO SORRY!

Anyway, thanks so much. I'm glad you liked it. I'm not into that whole traditional uke/seme sort of relationship. I like to play fast and lose with that sort of thing.
psycho_iceapple
Apr. 28th, 2008 08:25 pm (UTC)
Wow...just...WOW. In the words of Black*Star, "HYO-HOO!!!" (I think. That's just my interpretation of it.)

Good Lord, this was...amazing.

I think you've inspired me, dear. XD

aravistarkheena
Feb. 28th, 2011 12:16 am (UTC)
Man, I'm so sorry. I just realized I missed this comment when I posted a few years.

I'm glad that you liked the fic. :DDDD

*knuckle bump*
ichinonaru
May. 30th, 2008 03:24 am (UTC)
OMGAWD! I have been looking for nice LockonXSetsuna fic for ages and I encountered this hawt piece of fic! ILU! It's sooo hard to find fics like this and I'm sooo glad I found this piece.. I love the way you wrote their characterizations... Sooo IC and damn I want to stalk you to see if you have other hawt fics like this! Write moreeee!!!
aravistarkheena
Feb. 28th, 2011 12:19 am (UTC)
Oh man, someone just commented to this and I realized I never answered some of the feedback on this page. I'm SO SORRY about that!

Anyway, I'm glad you liked the fic when you read it. A million years ago. >.>>>

But still, Lockon/Setsuna is a ton of fun. I'm happy you enjoyed it so much. I'm glad you thought the characterization was on. Sometimes I worry about that.

Thanks again and sorry it took so long for me to seeeeeeeeee this.
karinablue_rose
Dec. 8th, 2008 04:13 pm (UTC)
I am not usually into this pairing but that some of the hottest sex that I have ever read.Fantastic work.

Edited at 2011-01-20 06:20 pm (UTC)
aravistarkheena
Feb. 28th, 2011 12:21 am (UTC)
I'm so glad you edited this comment because I totally didn't realize I'd missed the feedback to this fic. Thanks so much. I'm such a spaz sometimes.

Anyway, I'm glad you liked the fic. I love seducing people into liking my favorite pairings. ~<3

And thanks again for comment editing. I can't believe I missed half the comments on this page.
piyomon
Jan. 7th, 2009 11:01 am (UTC)
That was just... "is just here or is it hot in me?" XD

I was applying lipgloss when I started reading -- which was a mistake as I was staring into my monitor and I never finished my touch-up.

Just... WOW!
aravistarkheena
Feb. 28th, 2011 12:23 am (UTC)
Ok, confession time: I just realized I missed half the feedback on this page! I know you commented forever ago, but I wanted to thank you for the feedback.

I'm glad you enjoyed the fic and that I pulled you in so much you forgot about your lipgloss. :DDD
sistonpaper
May. 9th, 2014 05:39 pm (UTC)
Usually that kind of OS are just focused on sex, which is good 'cause effectively sex is the topic, but I always appreciate something more, a kind of psychological analysis of characters, feelings and emotions. Setsuna and Lockon are heavy characters, they've a lot of shapes and shadows. They're not heroic or winners. I think they are mostly damaged, desperate, and they fell apart a long time ago. So, everything is in your OS. Everything i've always thought about them it's exactely what I found in those "1,100ish" words. Essential and effective :)
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