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Title: Trepidation of the Spheres
Author: Aravis Tarkheena
Pairing: Roy/Tim
Rating: R, maybe
Warnings: Angst, fluff, Tim’s POV,
Disclaimer: Not mine, everyone’s legal
Word Count: 20,337 >:O
Author’s Notes: I’m just glad this is done. This is dedicated to all the people who told me good things when I was sad and upset. Thanks guys, it may have seemed stupid, but it meant a lot to me.


The links take you to Roy Toys. I posted it there because I don't have to further split the chapters. I hate doing that. >:O


Part I
Part II


I think it'd be best if you left any feedback here, as I haven't gotten the hang of responding to it there.

Comments

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greeneyelove
Apr. 25th, 2008 11:08 pm (UTC)
You took me through all the emotions with this one. And still gave me a happy ending. WOW. I hated Kendra. What a bitch. And poor Roy. I felt so bad for him. He was hurt, but willing to put it aside because he loved Timmy.

I know I'm babbling, but I can't help it. I loved reading from Tim's POV.

This? An all time fave.
aravistarkheena
Apr. 26th, 2008 12:20 am (UTC)
Phew, that makes me feel a whole lot better about things. I'm really glad you liked it. You have no idea how relieved I am to hear that. Thanks so much. <3
darthbatgirl
Apr. 26th, 2008 12:27 am (UTC)
SQUEEEEEEE!!!!!!

Words fail to describe how wonderful this story is. The whole look at Tim's relationship with Roy, the people who fill Tim's life, his emotions. It's all so wonderful!

Loved how you wrote Cassie and Dick. Love, love love this.

"hugs and squees again"
aravistarkheena
Apr. 26th, 2008 12:48 am (UTC)
Cassie's relationship with Tim is actually one of my favorite parts of this story, so I'm glad you liked it too. :D

*hugs back* I'm so relieved that this wasn't as terrible as I had convinced myself it was.
stalinglim
Apr. 26th, 2008 09:00 pm (UTC)
This was really good.

Tim's pranks were OMG great. Poor ROY! He's suffering so much here.

Roy was darn near perfect in here. I loved it when he started laughing at Tim and Lian when he woke up. :D
aravistarkheena
Apr. 27th, 2008 04:29 am (UTC)
Poor Roy totally got a raw deal in this one. I'd like to think he gets his own back at a later date with much teasing and many unexpected make out sessions.

I'm glad that you liked it. :D
geministar01
Apr. 26th, 2008 09:39 pm (UTC)
This? This fic is...so much...wow. So good. Just. Brain-shattering, grammer-crushing good. So much emotion, and it's all so *real* and so *good* and...EEE! >.< I can't even say how good it is!

And, while the relationship between Tim and Roy is indeed tops, I can't help marveling at the wonderfulness of the girls. So many slash stories just ignore the ladies in the leading guys' worlds, but this? So many wonderful things. Especially Cassie. I LOVE this Cassie. Zoanne is a close second favorite.

Best story I've read in ages.
aravistarkheena
Apr. 27th, 2008 04:32 am (UTC)
Aw, thanks so much!

One my favorite things about writing this story, was writing Tim's relationship with Cassie. They're a lot of fun together. :D

I'm glad that you liked it! :DD
anthraciteowl
Apr. 27th, 2008 06:45 am (UTC)
I left a review at Roy Toys. Should I have commented here instead?
aravistarkheena
Apr. 27th, 2008 07:00 am (UTC)
Ah, so YOU were my anonymous reviewer! No, it's fine. I just need to figure out how to respond to your feedback. I just started playing with that site. I love it a lot, but I'm not well versed.

I'll go try and figure it out.
aravistarkheena
Apr. 27th, 2008 07:04 am (UTC)
Haha! I got it! I responded. We rule! *high fives*
anthraciteowl
Apr. 30th, 2008 06:15 am (UTC)
Sorry? I wasn't trying to be anonymous. It was my first time looking at the site, and I guess I used it slightly wrong. Oh well.
dark_eyed_brat
Apr. 27th, 2008 06:13 pm (UTC)
Really wonderful story, stories like these make me like RoyxTim and make me like Roy a lot. This had a lot of mixture of angst amd friendly human interaxtions between the characters.

Everybody else is dead line made me wanted to laugh and cry cause it is unfairly true!

Awesome job at writing this in first person, which I think is really difficult to do. You kept in Tim's voice very well, excellent job.
aravistarkheena
Apr. 27th, 2008 07:04 pm (UTC)
I'm glad that you enjoyed the story! Roy's such a fun guy to write. Thank you. :D
rocaw
Apr. 28th, 2008 07:42 pm (UTC)
That was wonderful! It was like a rollercoaster ride with highs and lows and then that ending? *hugs you*

I had not read much Roy/Tim until I found your LJ, but I'm so glad I did. Your story is proof of why they work so well together! =D
aravistarkheena
Apr. 29th, 2008 12:09 am (UTC)
I'm very glad to hear you liked it.

I'm also eminently pleased to hear I turned out onto Roy/Tim. It's one of my great missions in life to make everyone ship them. >:D
dylogger
Dec. 14th, 2010 11:27 pm (UTC)
Uh. The site is now down- could you post it up here?
aravistarkheena
Dec. 15th, 2010 12:31 am (UTC)
Sorry man, I don't actually have a copy of it anymore. I lost it when my computer fried and never actually got around to asking if anyone had a copy saved when the site went down.

I'll ask and let you know if anyone has it. I'll let you know if someone does.
not_unwise
Sep. 26th, 2012 09:12 pm (UTC)
Oh hey! Kind of years later but if your fic is still lost I totally have it saved on my other computer back at home if you're interested?
danthomir
Feb. 19th, 2014 07:35 pm (UTC)
Hi,
if you are still willing to send the story I'm very much interested.
eleawin
Mar. 9th, 2011 10:26 pm (UTC)
Hi there! I'm also interested by this fic, did you find a copy?
aravistarkheena
Mar. 9th, 2011 11:29 pm (UTC)
No, sorry. I contacted the webmaster and everything, but no dice. I fear it is lost to the ages.

I should probably lock down this entry. I didn't think anyone went BACK this far in my journal, so it didn't occur to me.
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